Is this it?

fire,

hot, burning,

breaking, melting, discharge,

all night long, gone too soon,

pain, crying, stabbing,

yawning, cold,

dead.

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2 thoughts on “Is this it?

  1. OOH I like this. It’s in the shape of a diamond? I need to experiment more. I tried a different way of writing for the Shutting Down post because sometimes it works better than my usual drawn out epic posts lol. Well done lovely! X

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